2. What stood out to me as important for an Elevator Pitch is that it has to be dynamic and has to really connect to the people that you are talking to. Of course I'm still not a master at it but I am working to improve on it. Also I find it really important to articulate which helps in the dynamics and overall understanding what you are saying.
3. Mostly I changed the length of my elevator pitch because I found that my first one was too long. This one is much shorter and straight to the point.
Hi Hung,
ReplyDeleteI like your idea and it is one I haven’t thought about before probably also because I don’t have a car but also because it’s kinda of a side part of going to gym experience that probably bothers a lot of people but nobody has attempted to creatively think about. I believe you should talk more about what space you could use for the parking you are going to use for your service at your next elevator pitch.
If you want to check my elevator pitch, here is the link:
http://lirimveliu.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Hung, I think your elevator pitch is very well done and charismatic. I understand your emphasis on the importance of a dynamic elevator pitch, because that is what you're using to basically sell yourself and your product. It is the first impression and first impressions are incredibly important. I'm glad you were able to figure out the appropriate length for the pitch because that is important as well. If you want to check out my pitch the link is http://kyrstind.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThat's a really great idea! It's so annoying that students have to wait for a certain time before they can park and your solution also stops people from abusing the system and parking at SW and never moving. I also really liked your pitch. It was attention grabbing and I felt that it was a very good pitch: You can see my pitch here: http://collinpd.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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